Resubmission of Assignment 4

Further to my tutor comments I made the following changes in my essay:

  • Change of title (as suggested by my tutor)
  • Expand discussion in introduction
  • Addition as reference [Sontag, S. (2003), Regarding the pain of others, Hamish Hamilton Ltd] as I felt that it was relevant in discussions in a couple of places

I also did the following two changes:

  • Addition of images of Manchester attach and London fire (these events happen between my initial submission and this one, simply as they were really socking events that I watched in the news, I thought that I should include them)
  • Captions in italics

These were not suggestions by my tutor; just felt I should do it.

Below you can see the initial submission


And the final one after the above corrections



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